progress update

we have re recorded the alley way scene we werent happy with and have made our OTS shorter by using more jump cuts, we have also done our voice recordings and put them into our OTS, we have still got to put music to our OTS then we have completely finished it. after that we will evaluate as a group our OTS and talk about what we could have done better, we will also put our original OTS on the blog to show our improvements, jordan will be doing this, we have also got to put our continuity task on the blog.